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Writing Continuity

A special person is on the set for television and movies with the job of seeing that an actor wears the same scarf, uses the same glass set in the same place in each scene. Continuity. An author needs writing continuity.

What Is Writing Continuity?

Tolkien spent years with his world building to ensure his writing continuity. The languages, the creatures, the landscapes had to stay the same not only in one book, but throughout all of them.

I’m not in his class, but I am concerned with this too. One draft I was working on had a character in the beginning reappear toward the end with a new name. Oops.

cover for "Dora's Story" by Karen GoatKeeper
Writing continuity became a nightmare in this novel. It takes place over several years and involves several goat shows with many of the same participants who grow older over the years along with their goats. I thought I was done only to find I had dropped a year and had to add it back in. Continuity involves time, setting, characters, events, in short, every aspect of a novel.

Outlines Help

In my present novel draft, there is a major storm lasting several days. Yes, storms have changes from one day to the next. Some things must remain constant.

The wind is a factor. At the beginning of the storm there are high straight line winds. These are hard enough to tear leaves, twigs and small branches off the trees. These diminish for a time to a stiff breeze that does not pull leaves off the trees. It then picks up again as the storm blows itself through.

When does each change happen? What effects does Mindy see at each stage? I set up an outline to track the storm factors.

Heavy rain falls throughout the storm. Mindy tracks how much. She adds it up as the amounts increase. Writing continuity insists that the amounts add up correctly and gain in a match to the stage of the storm.

After the storm, Mindy is left cleaning up the mess. Part of that is repairing the cow pasture fence. How fast can she work? She is one person, working alone, not a super hero. And, how many posts are there around this pasture? Which way do they lean? Why?

Reading a finished novel, the reader sees the writing continuity without realizing the work the author did to ensure it was right. When it isn’t right, the reader knows it. Back to my outline so my novel will get it right.

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Saving Chilled Kids

I’ve always had my goat kids born in March as the weather had settled. No more. Now, even in March, I may be left saving chilled kids.

There are few things about raising goats worse than going out to find a doe had her kids on a frosty dawn and they are lying there, limp. It doesn’t take long for a newborn kid to die of hypothermia.

My Preparations

Before I go out to the goat barn on cold mornings, I start the fire in the wood stove. Wood heat is radiant heat. It warms you quickly, completely.

There is a supply of kid goat coats in the milk room. A few old towels are in another pile.

Next is checking the barn for new kids. Goats usually twin and I’ve been watching my does as I can usually tell whether they will single or twin. This is important as newborn kids can get separated.

saving chilled kids success newborn Nubian buck
Newborn goat kids are small and wet. They can not keep themselves warm for several days. That sets them up to get chilled. Hypothermia is an emergency to watch for and treat when kids are born in cold weather.

Saving Chilled Kids

If I find a newborn kid, the first step is to dry it off as much as possible. This is what the old towels are for.

A chilled kid can seem normal, but its mouth is cold inside and it doesn’t want to nurse. Such a kid is bundled up and taken to the house, put in a box bedded on old towels and placed near the wood stove.

If the kid is limp, I towel it off anyway. It may be alive and will move a little, usually trying to cry. The prognosis isn’t good, but this kid is also put near the wood stove.

Getting Kids Warm

It’s tricky telling when a kid is warmed up. They warm up on the outside quickly, but not on the inside. If such a kid is taken out to the barn, it will chill again.

A fully warmed up kid is up, active and asking to nurse. Its mouth is warm inside.

This kid gets a goat coat and taken out to the barn where its mother is usually delighted to have her kid back.

Cold, Not Chilled

Nubians talk a lot. The kids talk to their mothers. Sometimes a kid will have a higher, begging sound and call over and over.

If the kid isn’t hungry, it is cold. A goat coat will often warm it up.

Saving chilled kids isn’t always possible. But those that survive to run and play later on make the effort worthwhile.

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Boring Storyline

A massive storm is headed north. It leaves flooding and destruction in its wake. Getting ready for its arrival is a boring storyline.

In my new novel, Mindy has three days to fill. One is spent stocking up. The second finishes up tasks and putting things away. Last is setting things up for the coming flood.

Routines Are Boring

Rural routines are normally a boring storyline. Each day has its routines. Excitement is not appreciated as it often means something went wrong. Mindy lives a rural life with regular routines and tasks. Ho hum says the reader.

Readers don’t read boring books. They don’t make it past a boring beginning. When I read over the draft for these three days, it was boring. How do I make these three days engaging? Suspenseful?

I know these days are important. They set up the rest of the novel. The reader doesn’t know this. How can I avoid having these three days being a boring storyline?

What is happening?

Looking for Suspense

The storm is coming. How bad is it expected to be? How bad has it been? Suspense? Morbid anticipation?

Mindy is making preparations for the storm. She has livestock to protect. There are buildings and equipment to secure.

These things are unfamiliar to most people today. Rural life is so far removed from city people’s reality as to seem alien, belonging to another country even.

More familiar perhaps would be the phone calls from Justin, her husband. He is working elsewhere. He wants to take her away from this life she has come to love.

Life is made up of choices. Many of these choices mean little. Some can change our whole lives.

From these beginning days with the boring storyline come the choices Mindy must make. They are choices only she can make. And she must make them alone. But first she must survive the coming storm.

cover for "Dora's Story" by Karen GoatKeeper
“Dora’s Story” presented some of the same problems the new novel does. It is in six parts, each separate, all related in a circular storyline. The new one has three parts, each building on the one before.
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Keeping Kids Warm

Lately I’ve been asked about keeping kids warm when they are born in very cold weather. Living in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan gave a whole new meaning to this problem.

First Dry the Kids

When a goat kid is first born, it is covered with fluids. Its fur is sopping wet. Wet fur loses heat fast. The first problem is to get that kid dry, really dry.

I’ve seen recommendations for wiping kids off with newspapers. I tried it. The paper did scrape off any membranes and squeegeed off some liquid. The kid was left wet.

Old towels are my choice for drying off newborn kids. They clean the kid off like newspapers. Towels are made to absorb liquid. Rubbing off a kid leaves it damp.

goat kid goat coat
Goat kids do fine in their coats. How long the coats stay on depends on the kid and the temperatures. It’s best to take them off in the morning so the kid can get used to not wearing one before a cold night moves in.

This is not good enough. Up north, we had no electricity. Heat lamps were not an option. Here in the Ozarks the barn is a hundred years old and a tinderbox. We brought the kids in and stashed them by the wood stove. It didn’t take long for the kids to be dry.

Dry kids can take a lot of cold, if they have protection. I have two approaches to keeping kids warm.

Second Get Kids Warm

The easy one is a goat coat. My big goats have sweatshirts. My kids get coats made from the sleeves I cut off. These work very well in the Ozarks.

goat coats keeping kids warm
My Nubian doe High Reaches Drucilla is totally unconcerned about the goat coats on her kids. This is typical. The kids don’t seem to mind them either continuing to run and play the same as always.

Up north coats help, but are not enough. In really cold weather we kept the kids in by the wood stove taking them out every so often to nurse. In a week, these kids were ready to stay out in the barn even at zero or below.

My other solution is a cubby hole. I place a line of three hay bales, two high against a wall. Two more bales are placed in front of these with a gap slightly smaller than the length of a bale between them. Another bale is placed over the hole. Using a board under this bale is a good idea.

In no time the cubby hole is keeping kids warm as they pile in.

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Draft Considerations

The fun part of writing is doing a draft. I can make things up as I go. Afterwards, draft considerations descend with a vengeance.

November was my carefree, write drafts time. That is the great thing about participating in NaNo (National Novel Writing Month). Getting 2000 words a day down on a draft leaves no time for careful research, corrections or rewriting.

I worked on the ends of two novels. One is finished. One is not. I’ve discovered that 25,000 words is only a third of what is needed to complete the thing.

Nature Book? Scifi Book? Both?

The Carduan Chronicles has been challenging from the first. It was a simple survival scifi idea. A spaceship drops out of a worm hole in the middle of a February ice storm and lands in an Ozark ravine.

draft considerations include settings
Ship Nineteen in The Carduan Chronicles ends up in an Ozark ravine. The Carduans must find a place to call home. It needs to be defensible, have building possibilities as they would rather not live in their spaceship forever, have ready access to food and water and have growth potential. Since the spaceship is 30 inches long and eighteen inches high and wide (The Carduans are four inches tall.), a ledge such as this one along my road might be perfect. Knowing the setting is essential to writing about Ship Nineteen and how they learn to live in this alien place so full of dangers.

I wrote that draft one November. Except it wasn’t complete. There had to be a second ship.

This ship drops out of a worm hole about the orbit of Jupiter and must go over the sun to get to Cardua. There are many events happening on the ship during the fifteen weeks it takes.

I wrote that draft one November. Except the two accounts were two takes on the same time frame, the same people and they merged near the end. Enter another draft.

This is the draft I am trying to complete in between several other projects now that November is over. Reality has returned. Draft considerations are now top of the list.

How Many Manuscripts?

There is the completed novel draft. I need to do lots of research for that one and get it rewritten. My deadline is a March release, so I better get busy.

The Chemistry Project has taken a new turn. I need to complete the book, yes. However, my science books are mostly ignored. I hope to release them as units on a teaching site.

And the Dent County Flora needs attention. Draft considerations for this massive mess are mostly backing up the pictures from this year and identifying all the unknowns I can. Then I can fill in more pages.

But Cardua still calls. There are five weeks left in their journey to write about to finish this draft. The hardest part for it is yet to come. Draft considerations for this close to 200,000 word project will take months as I need more descriptions of Cardua, making sure everything is believable for four inch tall aliens and cutting down the size of this monster.

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Wildlife Surprises

When we first moved here, I thought wildlife surprises were turning around to find a black snake where my foot would go. And that is a surprise.

Another such encounter was reaching into a hen nest and grabbing a black snake. I don’t know which of us had the biggest heart attack.

Chills still come up my back when I remember walking in the woods and looking down on my jeans to find them crawling with ticks. At least the snakes want as little to do with me as possible and vanish quickly. Ticks must be removed as they don’t want to leave.

Perhaps I’m giving the wrong impression. Although there are unpleasant wildlife surprises, there are more pleasant ones.

A group of tom turkeys spent months walking around in the pastures eating grass seeds and insects. An eight point buck stood in the back of the yard one morning. Baby grey foxes played in the back yard one year.

Every year brings a new set of wildlife surprises. Some seem routine as coming across box turtles while walking in the hills. Others are treats as when the bald eagles visit the valley or turkey vultures roost in a tree across from the house.

albino animals are wildlife surprises
Albino animals have some genetic reason for being unable to make melanin which gives animals their color. In the Ozarks, a white animal has trouble blending into the scenery and often has a short life. That makes spotting one such as this albino grey squirrel one of my wildlife surprises.

The latest surprise is an albino squirrel. It came hunting black walnuts in the back yard one afternoon. I’m glad I got a picture as it hasn’t been back since.

Each day brings something different, something special. Cold, frosty mornings put icy lace around leaves while freezing fingers and toes. Sunrises are never the same, but that first light sparkles on the icy coatings on tree branches.

Who knows what today will bring. All it takes is going for a walk, looking around outside or out the windows to see both special sights and maybe wildlife surprises.

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Hoarding Books

I’ll admit I’ve been hoarding books most of my life. I love books. I love reading them and writing them.

Used book sales were the highlights of my year. Every sale sacks of new books came home to fill my bookshelves.

How many bookshelves? Eight four foot by eight foot, two three foot by eight feet and a few smaller bookcases lined my front room walls, sat in side rooms and tempted me with their titles. That doesn’t count the stacks on the tops or on the floor.

Meeting Reality

Some of those bookcases held reference books. Teaching science requires a science library for lesson ideas. Researching plants requires guide books. Raising livestock requires veterinary and care books.

But the other bookcases held hundreds of books waiting to be read. I claim a thousand now, although I’ve never really counted them. Since I read about fifty of them a year, the last will be read about twenty years from now.

I am a senior citizen, an older senior citizen. Those books waiting for me to read them will probably end up going for fifty cents a box or tossed into a dumpster.

My solution was to stop going to the used book sales. I’m reading and giving away many of my books to people or book sales so others can enjoy reading them. I hope they will be read, not sit gathering decades of dust as they have on my shelves.

cover for "Capri Capers" by Karen GoatKeeper
This book was downloaded for free several times during holiday giveaways. And disappeared. So many people won’t look at a book unless it has lots of reviews, yet they won’t take the time to review a book themselves, even if they have gotten the book, a product of months of work, for free.

Book Reviews

As an author, I want other people to read my books. It’s hard work to write a book, rewrite it, edit it, create a cover and publish it.

The book market has changed. When I choose a book, I look at the dust jacket to find out something about the book. Reviews are nice, but they do not persuade me to read a book.

Why? Because there are books I enjoy reading and books I don’t enjoy reading. Take Stephen King. Many people love reading his books. I tried one, well two. The novel was enough for me. The one on writing was interesting and helpful.

The book market emphasizes book reviews. It’s vital to get reviews of your books.

Gift Giving Time

Now there are opportunities for me to give digital copies of my books away over the holidays. I’ve done this thinking people will read my books and do reviews of them.

Instead people download hundreds of free books just like the sacks I used to lug home in my hoarding books days.

The books sit on their phones or tablets or ereaders unread as so many of mine on my shelves. And then they are erased. Hoarding books is now guilt free as the books don’t sit there in front of you.

No one read them. No one reviewed them.

I don’t think I will participate. My digital books are $2.99 each. Maybe, if someone purchases one, they will actually read it and maybe do a review of it.

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My Goats Are Dressed Up for Winter

One thing for sure: Being cold is no fun. When the temperatures drop to the low twenties, my goats are cold. That’s when they’re dressed up for winter.

Originally I would cut old blankets in half, fold the half and tie it onto the goat. As soon as they found they were warm, they left the blanket alone, sometimes for days. That was up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan where cold meant zero or below.

The Ozarks can get that cold, but it’s rare. Low twenties is more common. The goats got too hot, felt itchy and pulled the blankets off.

Then the goats started shivering again.

There are patterns for goat coats. I looked at them, even had a couple I saved. Somehow I never got around to making any as each had to be individually fitted.

Nubian doe Agate is dressed up for winter
The sweatshirts don’t seem like much protection for the goats, but they are. Cold goats don’t give much milk. Sick goats do better if they aren’t cold too.

Repurposing Sweatshirts

There were sweatshirts in my drawer. I never wore them. My preference is a vest with a hoodie over it.

I cut the arms short on the sweatshirts. Then cut a long arc out of the belly. These became the new goat coats.

It’s not much of a hassle putting these on a goat when they are on the milk stand. I slide the neck opening over their head. Pull up one front hoof and put it through an armhole. Pull up the other front hoof and put it through the other arm hole.

The goat gets warm. The sweatshirt stays put until I take it off.

Dressed Up for Winter

Now I have sweatshirts for all of my goats. They range from medium to double X for the does. Augustus takes a triple X as does Pest, my resident wether.

The does came in the first really cold morning shivering. They would go out and bask in the sun to warm up for the day.

I set up the sweatshirts. Each goat would have the right size.

My herd is a colorful array now. No one shivers in the morning. And they are easily spotted this deer season since they are dressed up for winter.

My Nubian goat herd is dressed up for winter
Goats are rough on sweatshirts. They tear them. Arguing goats can grab them and tear holes in them. Replacing a sweatshirt is much easier than replacing a goat coat. And the array of colors is pretty as the herd goes out for the day.

Side Benefit

Those sleeves aren’t thrown away. The cuffs are cut in half. Two leg holes are cut out. They become goat coats for kids.

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Ending Two Novels

National Novel Writing Month makes November special for me. It gives me license to write madly with no or few doubts about what I’m writing. It’s often the beginning of a new novel. This year is hopefully ending two novels.

Most of my novels began as NaNo drafts. Sometime in September or October the shadow of an idea occurs. It’s at the edge of my mind, teasing me, eluding me for a time.

One day this little idea grows up into characters and plot. The new novel waits for me to write it down.

cover for "Dora's Story" by Karen GoatKeeper
I was driving when the idea of a Black Beauty type novel about a goat occurred to me. I was only going a few miles, but had thought of the goat and several possible events for this new novel begun during another November NaNo and finished during two Camp NaNo sessions.

Planning For November

This year I didn’t go looking for an idea for a new novel. I have three sitting around waiting for my attention. One is a disaster in need of a total rethinking and rewriting.

The other two are unfinished. It’s not that I don’t know or have a good idea what that ending is. I do. I just haven’t written the endings down yet.

So I decided to spend NaNo ending two novels.

The goal is 50,000 words, a novella. Both of my novels are three quarters done. Neither needs another 50,000 words. Together I should have the word total.

NaNo asks the potential writer to say what novel is being worked on. I thought about it and decided to go with “The Carduan Chronicles”.

In between “The Chemistry Project” investigations and puzzles and the “Dent County Flora” pictures, memories of Cardua surfaced. I remembered names, events, where the novel left off.

November Begins

November 1 dawned. I sat down at my computer. And opened my flood/isolation novel instead.

It’s a good thing I’m ending two novels this November. I’m 16,000 words into Mindy’s story and building to the climax. About 10,000 more words will end this draft.

That won’t end work on this novel. I have lots of research to do, people to interview, rewriting to do. But it will finish the rough draft.

And it will leave me about 25,000 words to use about Cardua.

Maybe I won’t have a new novel this December. But ending two novels is reason to celebrate.

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Hidden Bushes

Over the summer all the plants leaf out. Hidden bushes are there in plain sight, but hiding among all the green leaves.

Autumn arrived. Yellows blazed out. As those leaves fell, the oranges and reds glowed on the hillsides.

Now those leaves are gone. Most of the trees are bare brown and gray branches. Most bushes are the same. Not all bushes.

The hidden bushes are now easy to spot. They are the ones still hanging onto some of their red leaves. These are often the bushes I didn’t know grew here.

hidden bushes include Carolina Buckthorn
This Carolina Buckthorn is a native shrub in the family Rhamnaceae. It can be a large bush, but is usually smaller and hidden by other bushes growing around it. In the fall it is one of the last to lose all of its leaves. Then its red to yellow leaves with the strong ribs are easy to spot. Some even still have black berries although those are relished by many birds.

All summer I’ve been walking the trails at ShawneeMac Conservation Area because I saw many bushes I never saw here. Some I was glad I didn’t see as they are invasive. Some I assumed didn’t grow here.

My Hidden Bushes

The hidden bushes are proving me wrong in several cases. Carolina Buckthorn is one of them. It’s a pretty bush and can get ten feet tall. I’d never seen it except around the Lakes.

Burning Bush is one I’m not as glad to know grows here. It can become quite a nuisance. There are several still sporting red leaves and fruit.

The advice is to kill out invasive species. I’m sure the reasons are good. But it is a lost cause. Nurseries still sell these plants. People still plant these plants. They have spread into many places.

Eliminating these plants in one area does nothing about the rest. As soon as you look the other way, more of them are growing where you thought they were no more.

another of the hidden bushes
At first glance this bush is a lot like the Carolina Buckthorn and may be called that by some people. There are several differences in the shape of the leaves, the darker coloring and the occasional thorns on the twigs. Now that these hidden bushes have been spotted, I can watch them in the spring to verify what its name is.

Another hidden bush is not identified yet. The tentative name is for a bush unknown in the area and rare in the Bootheel. Now these hidden bushes are spotted, I can keep an eye on them in the spring when all those green leaves try to camouflage them again.