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Creating Characters

Some novels begin with a plot. Others begin with a character. But all novels require creating characters.

Where do these fictional characters come from? How does a writer find these characters?

cover for "Broken Promises" by Karen GoatKeeper
This is the only novel I have written that uses a person I once knew. He is in the book the way he was when I knew him. He is now deceased.

Asking For Trouble

Even some famous authors like Hemmingway got into trouble by using their friends, acquaintances and enemies as characters in their novels. If they were lucky, they just had to find new friends. Unlucky writers ended up being sued.

Having written this, I do base my characters on people I know, have read about or seen. But, I don’t use the people exactly. Instead I look at some trait or traits these people have and build a character around them, one that is not the original person.

cover of "Old Promises" Hazel Whitmore #2 by Karen GoatKeeper
When I was doing a practical teaching course, I noticed a student who was extremely shy. Who was she? I never found out. Yet, she became the model for Hazel’s friend in this book.

Creating Characters Exercise

Next time you are out and about, look at the people around you. These people are strangers. You know nothing about them, really.

Pick out one. What do you think this person is like? Do they work? Invent a personality for this person. How would this person fit into a story or novel?

cover for "Dora's Story" by Karen GoatKeeper
Names were a big challenge in “Dora’s Story” as there were goat shows and every exhibitor and goat needed a name.

What’s In a Name?

I hate finding names for my characters most of the time. Now and then a character just has a name, but this isn’t usually the case.

Usually, the name search takes time and persistence. There are online lists. Books, telephone books, old school annuals are all places to look.

Several factors need consideration. One is the time frame of the novel. Names change in popularity or even existence over the years. Nova is not a possibility for an eighteenth century novel.

Plus, the name needs to be one the writer is comfortable with. I tend to like two and three syllable names. There’s no real reason, but I am happier with characters with names of these lengths.

cover for "Capri Capers" by Karen GoatKeeper
As this was a fun novel, the names had to be fun. Roscoe Rascal, Dan Janus, even Harriet Zeigenhert which is German for goat.

Names Can Change

No matter how detailed a writer is creating characters, things including names can change as the plot evolves. New traits will emerge in the characters. They will become like people you know well.

A great compliment was paid me talking with a woman about Life’s Rules. I was describing Stephanie, my main character. The woman thought she was a real person, someone she wanted to meet.

Creating characters is important for a writer and compliments like this one make the effort worth while.

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Never Ending Repair List

From time to time I find a copy of some homesteading magazine. You know, the ones with the beautiful pictures of neat, clean homesteads and well dressed people. Reality hits when I look at my never ending repair list.

never ending repair list for chickens
My chicken nests are old. I built them over thirty years ago from scrap lumber. This one finally wore out possibly due to the last time I tossed it out the door containing a black snake. The chickens insist it needs to move to the top of the to do list as it is one of their favorite nests.

Do It Right the First Time

How many times have I heard this? There is some fantasy out there trying to make me believe that, if I build something right the first time, I won’t have to do it again.

never ending repair list for the garden
I replaced a narrow gate with a wider one so the former brace no longer reached across. The PVC pipes are over T-posts so I could hang additional wire to thwart a deer. However, the outer post leans and causes the fence to lean.

The Ozarks makes a mockery of this saying. Rain, heat, cold, humidity attack as soon or even sooner than a project is done.

My PVC gates are a good case. The pipes are holding up well. The wire is rusting. It leaves rust tracings on the pipes.

The hinges sag. I’m not sure why they sag, but they do. That leaves the gates scraping on the frozen dirt or catching on walnuts the chickens kick into their path.

Shoring up the garden fences is on the never ending repair list. Perhaps I can get to some of it this summer.

Chicken nest repaired
The plywood may be old, but most of it is still usable. I replaced the bottom and nailed the sides back together. This hen approves my work.

Barn Cleaning

There was a time when I scraped down to the cement when I cleaned the barn. Not now. After all, I will be tossing new bedding down and the goats will be making new deposits almost before the old bedding is out the door.

Chickens make a big mess. They toss feed out of the feeder. Their new roost pole decided to sag and refuses to stiffen up. A nest box needs rebuilding.

garden gate repaired
One thing a homesteader needs to learn is to have a pile of usable stuff. I used the old brace, bent, and a piece of PVC pipe left when the septic tank was replaced and had a brace to straighten the gate post. The metal brace was from an old lawn mower that stopped working.

New Homesteaders

Now and then I meet some people, cheery people, people who are so happy to own a place in the country. They have such big plans and dreams.

I always wonder if I will see them again in a year. Will they still be so cheerful? Or will they have met the never ending repair list, you know, the one that laughs at those fancy homesteading magazines.

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Writing Illustrated Books

A lot of authors are writing illustrated books now. Perhaps these books are popular because people love to watch television and movies and find books of nothing but words boring.

Of course, books for very young readers are filled with pictures. Some have no text at all or very little. As these readers get older, they may like to have those pictures.

I came across such a book. “Matilda” by Roald Dahl seems like a typical book and has an interesting story. What sets it apart are the illustrations by Quentin Blake scattered through the text telling the story.

Writing illustrated books like Ducks Love Hats
Picture books are a kind of illustrated book. “Ducks Love Hats” has no text so the images form the story.

What Are Illustrated Books?

Picture books are listed as illustrated books. These books are in a special category as the pictures tell the story. Even if there is text, the pictures convey the story.

An illustrated book uses pictures to augment the story. Usually, if all of the pictures are removed, the text would tell the story.

"For Love of Goats" is an illustrated book
This image from “For Love of Goats” goes with the entry for E for Electric Fence, but the text is needed to explain what is happening. This is an illustrated book.

Graphic novels are a third type of illustrated books. They trace back to comic books, but now tell much more elaborate stories. These use the pictures to tell the story, but have text and dialogue to add details. Removing the pictures removes the story, just as removing the text would. Both must be there.

Writing Illustrated Books

How an author approaches writing such a book depends on the type of book. Picture books are primarily pictures. When I write a picture book, I see it as a series of pictures. Any text is added later, although I may write out the text before beginning to draw the sketches.

In an illustrated book the pictures are an afterthought. As I write about Ship Eighteen of the Carduan Chronicles, I know I want to have illustrations heading each chapter. The pictures aren’t necessary, however, they will enhance the story.

I have read several graphic novels. It is an interesting format, but one I haven’t used.

Instead, I will continue writing illustrated books mostly as picture books.

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Growing Weeds

Last year had lots of problems and the garden suffered. The result is that now I am growing weeds.

Doing a little weeding isn’t a problem. It can be relaxing sitting there in the garden in the sun letting the mind wander. A few weeds are to be expected.

tools to prevent growing weeds
The weeds are attacked with the potato fork to break up the soil, the soil knife to pull them and the cardboard to stop them.

Weed Overload

What is in my garden right now is a weed overload. There are lots of weeds that start growing in the fall and do their best to take over by spring.

Other weeds are perennials. These are harder to find as they spend the winter as roots hidden in the soil waiting for warm weather before exploding up.

Chickweed
The weeds are solid in the Jerusalem artichoke patch. The scalloped leaves are dead nettle and not edible. The smooth edged leaves are chickweed, an edible green. It has some frost damage on it.

Tackling the Overload

It’s really easy to be overwhelmed by the growing weeds. This is part of their strategy for success. There are so many, the gardener gives up and they can take over.

Unfortunately for the weeds, I am too stubborn to yield my garden to them. So, I have to have a strategy to avoid the overwhelm.

Moth Mullein rosette
This is a moth mullein rosette. Although it is one of the weeds, it is also a lovely wild flower. I leave a few rosette here and there to enjoy the flowers next summer.

Since my garden is divided into beds and pathways, I target a section at a time. When I get too stressed, I focus on places with only a few weeds. Or I do a strip across a bed just a foot wide.

The objective of any weeding strategy is to make enough progress against the weeds each time to feel successful. Then it’s easier to come back the next day.

No growing weeds here
The pathways have cardboard on them. The vegetable bed has thick mulch. It’s ready for spring when tomatoes or peppers will move in for the season.

Growing Weeds for Food

Chickweed is one of the overwintering weeds. It has colonized the Jerusalem artichoke bed along with much of the garden.

This is one of the wild greens filled with nutrition. It has a mild taste and is good in salads, stir fries and other ways. And it is always nice to have some fresh garden greens in the middle of winter.

However, chickweed is a miniature kudzu. Left alone it smothers everything around it and produces thousands of seeds.

Spring will be vegetable growing time. Growing weeds is not part of this. So, some of the chickweed will end up on the dinner table. Most will end up in the compost pile.

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Setting Reading Goals

I don’t think much about setting reading goals. Every year seems to be set for 70 books as that is about how many I read over the year.

There is a secondary goal. My home bookshelves are full of books. Out of the 70 total, I like to read at least 40 from my own shelves.

Picture Books

My reading goal does not include picture books normally. If I added these, my goal would be 370 books over the year.

There are so many wonderful picture books available. I do limit my selection to those I can check out of my library. Evergreen expands my library shelves to include libraries all over southern Missouri.

Reaching Reading Goals

As I found out this past year, life can really upset everything. I started last year intending to write several books and read 72 books.

Disaster struck in July. Most writing stopped. Reading stopped. A few months went by.

Setting reading goals helped. I do like to get to that reading total. There were a half dozen picture books to fill in at the end, but I did make my set goal.

January Again

So, here I am at the beginning of a new year of possibilities. Will disaster strike again? Maybe, but I won’t act like it will.

My reading goal will still be 70 books. I will still read those six picture books each week.

This year’s Library Review theme is the states. January is Washington, D.C. and used “First Ladies: An Intimate Group Portrait of First Wives” by Margaret Truman, a book I highly recommend along with some others.

February involves the New England states. The central book is “Of Time and Turtles” by Sy Montgomery, a fascinating look at the world of turtles and turtle rescue based in Massachusetts. There is the Tia Lola series set in Vermont and a new to me mystery series set in New Hampshire as well.

These won’t count for my new reading goal as I have to read ahead to do the reviews. But books on the South, Southwest, Midwest, Plains, West, Northwest, California, Alaska, Hawaii and Puerto Rico (U.S. Protectorate) will count.

Setting reading goals only adds a little incentive to read. The real incentives are all those books, books that look so interesting and appealing, waiting for me to read them.

The Salem Public Library, Salem, Missouri, does put their newsletter online.

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Raising Goats

I never intended to be a goat keeper. Raising goats never made my wish list growing up. When cold weather settles in, it is not on my list of favorite things at all.

One day, the temperature hit 76 degrees. At three in the afternoon, the cold began moving in. By five, when I went out to the barn, it was only 36 degrees. Winter was back.

raising goats in winter
The grass may be dormant, but my Nubian dairy goats prefer it to hay. Besides, the sun is warm.

Cold Goats

In the morning, the goats were shivering in twelve degrees. They wanted their sweat shirts back on. I considered this and decided to wait.

The sun was shining. One thing about goats standing in the sunshine is how fast they warm up. It is tempting to snuggle into their warm fur, so much warmer than any jacket.

water is popular
When water gets poured into the dish, chickens race over to get a drink. Most of the rush is over in this picture.

Cold Water

When the temperature is only twenty, water freezes quickly. Ice water may be nice on hot summer days, but not on cold winter ones.

One of the raising goats rules of such cold days is: No water is left standing at the barn. Instead, water is carried out in the morning, at noon and at night. Everyone who wants one gets a drink. Any water left over gets dumped out.

Buckets are for drinking
For some reason chickens love to drink out of the water buckets. Even when the water level is half way down, they strain to reach it.

Cold Chickens

My chickens don’t like such winter cold either. They do have nice feather coats to fluff up. So, the chickens race around looking for bugs that have disappeared for the winter.

Chickens are funny about ice. They love to peck it and eat it. But the ice makes them cold too.

The same rule applies: No water is left outside during the day. This is not popular at all.

When I take water out to the chicken yard, all the chickens come running over to mob the pan. I make sure there are several pans as the chickens argue about which one is first.

raising goats on pasture
Nubian doe High Reaches Opal is not fond of cameras. They may be some kind of monster. Everyone else is too busy clipping green grass encouraged to grow by warm temperatures to notice.

Raising Goats and Chickens

Books about livestock don’t mention water in winter cold. It’s one of the things you learn the hard way that first winter. The water freezes solid and must be chipped out of the pails so everyone can get a drink.

It’s easier to go out to check on everyone and give them a drink two or three times a day.

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Winter Mullein Rosettes

On a winter walk the side of the road is green with chicory, dandelion, dock and more stubbornly hugging the dirt. More noticeable are the winter mullein rosettes.

A number of plants called biennials spend a year growing, overwinter and bloom the next year. Mullein and thistles are some of them.

thistle winter rosette
Thistle rosettes are easy to know. The prickly leaves mark this one as a bull thistle.

Thistles

Bull thistle rosettes invaded the yards around the house a number of years ago. These are a biennial so the rosette appears first and the flowers the next year. We left a couple to see what the plants would be like.

Great shafts lined with thorns grew up reaching five or six feet tall. These had many branches and each branch was tipped with a pink hairy flower head.

These flowers are very popular. Hummingbirds drink nectar. Butterflies walk around on them sipping. Later a variety of birds including goldfinches, cardinals and sparrows eat the seeds.

Moth Mullein flowers
Moth mullein is a lovely wild flower. I let several grow and flower in my garden as well as in the yard. They do tend to come up in the hundreds the next year.

Winter Mullein Rosettes

Two mulleins invaded the front yard years ago. One is moth mullein with spikes of white flowers with purple hairy stamens. These usually get two feet tall, but can make three.

winter mullein rosette
Nothing else looks like a winter mullein rosette. The leaves can be darker green, but they are always fuzzy.

Common mullein rosettes have big, furry leaves looking like a bird nest on the ground. Unlike thistles that hug the ground, even under where the lawn mower reaches, mullein leaves stand up.

In the summer, tall stalks grow up five or six feet. Usually there is a single one with others appearing later as branches. Other times the stalks become elaborate candelabra. Yellow flowers open randomly along the stalks.

Herbal Tea

Nothing seems to be fond of the furry mullein leaves. However, they do make a nice herb tea. It has a slightly dusty, mild taste. A single leaf is good for two batches of tea for me. I usually toss in some mint leaves or calendula flowers with it.

The impressive flower spikes and wild tea are good reasons to let the mulleins grow.

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New Pumpkin Project Book

When “The Pumpkin Project” was written, I went to a local printer and had a couple of boxes of books printed. Those books are almost gone as is the printer. Now there will be a new “Pumpkin Project” book.

Germinating pumpkin seeds
Does the direction a seed faces matter? How about how deep the seeds are planted? How does a seed germinate? These and other investigations try to answer these questions in the Pumpkin Project.

What Is the Pumpkin Project?

This is a science activity book and more. Although it was written for those 10 to 15 in mind, others can enjoy it too.

The basic part surrounds the 19 Investigations and 2 Projects. These begin by looking at seeds, then germination and growing pumpkins. Of course, jack 0’lanterns are one of the projects.

The Pumpkin Stories tell about the history, seed packets, growing giant pumpkins and canning pumpkins. Puzzles are scattered throughout the book including mazes, searches, codes and more.

Recipes for cooking up pumpkins end the book. These are still tasty. I do keep making them from time to time to make sure. After all, pumpkin cookies are my favorite.

Painted Jack o'Lantern
One of the Pumpkin Project projects is to create a jack o’lantern. Directions are for painting and carving a pumpkin.

Changes

Editing a book, especially one as big as the “Pumpkin Project” at over 200 pages isn’t easy. Mistakes slip by. I fixed a lot of these.

Nothing much else changed. I worked on this book for several years, doing and redoing the Investigations. Research took time along with several trips to gather information and pictures.

Missouri State Champion Giant Pumpkin
Growing giant pumpkins takes dedication. This one was 878.5 pounds. Find out more about growing these giants in the Pumpkin Project.

What About the New Pumpkin Project Book?

The biggest changes will be in the cover. My original book has a spiral binding, one I like. Unfortunately, such bindings are only available from private printers and mine has moved to St. Louis.

That leaves me choosing between a paper cover or a hardback cover. Hardbacks are nice, but expensive. This is not a cheap book to print as it is so long and in color. I will have to choose paperback.

Will the price change? Probably. How much? I won’t know until I get the book printed.

The new Pumpkin Project book will be done and out soon.

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Watching the Birds

Cold weather and snow make for indoor days. We would rather be outside, but settle for watching the birds at the bird feeder.

That feeder was one of the first things we put up over thirty years ago. It has seen some changes over the years, but the bird crowd doesn’t mind as long as the sunflower seeds arrive every morning.

Watching the birds is fun with blue jays
When the blue jays move onto the bird feeder, they try to chase everyone else off. It doesn’t work well. Squirrels sneer at them.

The Feeder

The feeder is a simple affair. A metal tray is balanced on four t-posts with a wood rim to hold it in place. Four wood posts go up to hold a tin roof.

The tray holds a rectangular tray of sunflower seeds. An old pan without a handle holds water if the temperature is above freezing. A pottery bowl holds scratch feed. One corner has a wire cage with a suet cake in it.

cardinal watching the birds from the feeder
It’s late in the day. This cardinal has found the tray empty, but waits for it to refill as it must do magically if he only waits long enough. The magic is someone tromping out with more sunflower seeds.

These trays and dishes are collected at dark every evening and brought into the house. Night forays by raccoons and opossums are not welcome as they make a mess on the main feeder floor.

In the morning, the birds gather in neighboring trees and the feeder tray and roof to wait. Sometimes a squirrel comes early to check over the spilled seeds. The bird seed arrives shortly after dawn.

Squirrel on bird feeder
Squirrels on the bird feeder are annoying and little gluttons. This gray squirrel stays to one side so birds can come by on the other one. Some sit in the middle and chase off birds and squirrels alike.

Watching the Birds

Some birds are regulars all year, as the feeder is put out all year. Cardinals and morning doves are the main ones. The other visitors vary by the season.

Winter brings the titmice, chickadees, nuthatches and house finches. The others are more in evidence then too. Downy and red-bellied woodpeckers eat the suet. Blue jays attack the corn in the scratch feed. Doves like the milo.

red-bellied woodpecker facing morning dove
The red-bellied woodpeckers generally hop around the outside of the feeder until they get to the suet cake. Still, the morning dove finds him intimidating and tried to insist he go away.

Squirrels come too. Gray squirrels are sometimes good visitors by sitting at one end of the sunflowers allowing the birds to eat at the other end. Some gray and all red or fox squirrels hog the tray.

Arguing with the squirrels is pointless. It’s easier to let them nibble up what they want and leave. Then the tray can be refilled for the birds and we can get back to watching the birds for the afternoon.

More about feeding the birds is in “Exploring the Ozark Hills“.

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Novel Writing Time

December brings the end of a calendar year. Perhaps January starts off that year you plan to use for novel writing.

You know. That idea you’ve kicked around for years saying someday you will write a novel or a memoir – something.

phot idea for novel writing time
When I began writing “Dora’s Story”, the entire premise of the book unrolled for me in a short time of thinking about telling the story of a girl and her goat. But the link between goats and their owners was nothing new. I saw it at the Phelps County Fair getting pictures for “Goat Games”. This is a young Oberhasli doe with her proud owner.

Bad Reason for Novel Writing

You’re tired of your day job. Writing can make you a fortune. All you need to do is write that best seller.

Over a million new books are published every year. The chances of a debut novel becoming that gold mine are so slim it would take a microscope to see them.

Dora's Story novel writing time introduced Emily and Dora
As I developed the plot, Dora’s Story became a novel in six parts. The first one introduced Emily and Dora.

Good Reason for Novel Writing

There is that idea you can’t ignore. It’s a plot or a character or a wish to tell your family who you are and where you came from.

This thing is there when you wake up, whenever you stop during the day and puts you to sleep at night. It’s begging you to write it.

Dora's Story ending
As Dora moves from owner to owner and Emily searches for her, years go by. This brought in another aspect of novel writing: time passage. Finally, Dora ends up with Shawn.

Getting Ready

First, you will need a time to write. It can be the half hour before you go to bed or when you get up. Perhaps it is while you eat lunch.

Different people are most awake and ready to write at different times. Find that time for yourself and try to write then. If nothing else, write down notes so you can use them for writing later.

Second, you will need a place to write. This doesn’t need to be fancy or a whole room. It can be just enough room for your notebook or your laptop.

One essential thing in this place is being able to turn off the email, the phone, the interruptions for that bit of time. Once you start novel writing, you want to finish the thought you are working on and interruptions will make it fly out the window often to never return.

Barbara Rissler, Price o'the Field Nubians, with a Nubian doe. Love of goats continues.
I could see how much Barbara Rissler loved her Nubians as I visited her while writing Goat Games. In Dora’s Story, Emily searches for several years and her love for Dora keeps her going. In the end, she must make hard decisions about Dora.

Most Importantly

This novel writing is for you, no one else. Yes, readers matter once the novel is done, but the writing is for you.

And expect that first draft to stink. That’s what rewriting fixes.