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Changing Novels Into Books

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date June 30, 2023

When I wrote my first novel, “Broken Promises”, I had the idea that completing the novel was all there was to it. How wrong I was. Changing novels into books takes lots more work and thought. Open any novel and you can see all the extra things added.

Front Matter

All the pages before the first line of the novel are referred to as front matter. This can include the title page, copyright page, dedication and table of contents. These are not always the same for a printed book and a digital one.

My title pages always have a reference to the place the book is published. I have my print copy, GoatKeepers Press; the Kindle copy, Kindle Edition; and the Smashwords copy, Smashwords Edition.

The Table of Contents lists the same chapters. It doesn’t have to be in the printed book, but must be in the digital ones.

Each chapter has a title. The print book has page numbers. The digital copies have hyperlinks from the Table to the chapters and back again.

The Novel

Well, this is what I wrote, isn’t it? Changing novels into books means making changes here too.

Look at a published novel. All the text has even edges on left and right. There are page numbers. Each chapter usually begins on a new page.

And the last page of each chapter is not only a line or two long. If this is the case, I go back in the chapter and either add text or condense so the last page has several lines or becomes part of the previous page.

Digital copies have no page numbers. Usually, they have few page designations as the text flows freely on the ereader. The text is not justified with those even edges, but left justified.

Potential readers often look first at the title, then the cover and last the back cover for a summary of the book. Each indicates something about the book letting the reader know if it is a book that sounds interesting to them. The novel is important, both the story and the editing. but the title and cover are just as important as the novel will never be read if the others don’t interest the reader enough to open the cover. This one needs work.

Back Matter

Lots of stuff can be at the end of a novel. Some series have the first chapter of the next book. Acknowledgements by the author to people who helped with the novel, comments about the novel and lists of other books by the author are common.

Print books list the author’s website or other social media platform. Digital copies may even include links to these places.

Changing novels into books takes time and thought. But a book is not complete without all of these additions.

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Hopes, Dreams and Reality Cover

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date June 16, 2023

I am not an artist or an illustrator really. I am an author who needs covers and illustrations for books and prefers or needs to do them myself. That is the case for the “Hopes, Dreams and Reality” cover.

The novel surrounds a storm, before, during and after. Mindy, the main character, goes through the storm even though it leaves her isolated with no phone, electricity or water and with the road washed out and blocked by fallen trees. Other complications arise both just before and during the storm.

Planning the Cover

Since the storm is the main trigger for all that happens, it made sense to me to use it on the cover. It is a major storm and Mindy must fight it, so the cover has her fighting the storm.

A sketch took shape around these. This was done on drawing paper with pencil. It was transferred to watercolor paper for painting.

My preferred medium is watercolor. The quality of the colors appeal to me although I am prone to make mistakes. Watercolor mistakes are permanent and must be incorporated into the painting or mitigated somehow.

A big storm keeps the day dark, muting colors. The mood will also be muted. These affect the colors I choose to use for the Hopes, Dreams and Reality cover.

Working In Watercolor

Once the sketch is on the watercolor paper and the chosen tube of paints are laid out, the actual painting can begin. Watercolor has several choices and problems to work with.

There is no white in watercolor. The paper is white and, wherever white is wanted, no paint is put. This takes careful planning. It is possible to mask these areas, but I don’t.

Watercolor paint is just that: water based. The painter must add water to the paint in order to use it. More water results in a thin layer of color called a wash. Less water gives sharper lines and thicker color. When to use wash or dry brush needs planning ahead too.

The final, and most difficult for me, problem is time. Each color must have time to dry before a neighboring spot is painted or the paint will bleed or spread into the other area altering color and shape. I hate to sit and wait.

My covers are a usually a blend of digital and watercolor. For the Hopes, Dreams and Reality cover, I painted the figure then scanned it into the computer. Then I added the background color and printing. Sometimes I do these with watercolor, but opted for the digital with this cover. And, yes, I corrected a few problems with the watercolor.

The Cover

After negotiating my way through all of the steps, I finally have the Hopes, Dreams and Reality cover. Now I need to finish the final edit.

If you have any comments or suggestions, let me know through the Contact Page.

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Creating Book Covers

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date June 9, 2023

My last week has been spent creating book covers for both my new novel “Hopes, Dreams and Reality” and the teaching units from “The City Water Project”. That means nine covers.

Finding Images

There are online places to seek and purchase novel covers. I’ve looked at a couple and found the covers look nice, but don’t suit what I’ve written.

That leaves me deciding on images and drawing my cover designs. For nature books I can use photographs with the title etc. put on them using the computer. All other book covers must be drawn.

The image must reflect the book or teaching unit. The first water unit has two activities concerned with bottled waters and comparing tastes. The cover image is a water bottle.

For “Hopes, Dreams and Reality” the choice was more difficult. The book spans almost a month. The major storm takes four days yet sets everything else in motion. So, the image needed to reflect the storm.

Readers like seeing people on the covers. I don’t like drawing people. Having the main character, Mindy, standing holding an umbrella seemed so trite. The cover image I’m working with has Mindy fighting the wind and rain with her umbrella on her way to the barn.

Complications in Creating Book Covers

There is more on a book cover than the image. The title and author is on it too. The image may take center stage, but there must be room for the writing.

Another decision is whether or not I will write the title on the image or use the computer to add it to the image as I finish the cover later. With the teaching units I printed the titles on the covers. For my novel, I will use the computer.

If this were a book cover, I would add a dark blue border to define the cover as I did with “The Pumpkin Project”. This is for a digital download teaching unit from “The cith Water Project” so the border is not needed.

Creating the Cover

Sketches are fine. I sketch all my covers and illustrations with pencil first. Then I clear table space and take out my watercolors.

Watercolor pictures look good to me. I like the quality of the colors.

Watercolor is unforgiving. Any mistake is permanent. That is a major reason most artists prefer painting with oils and acrylics.

Digital Art

I know a digital artist and love her work. I still prefer creating book covers and illustrations with watercolor. Then I scan them into my computer.

This lets me add writing, if I want to, crop the image to the size of the book and, most importantly, fix mistakes where lines got too thick and other flaws in my image. I can also add an all over background color instead of using a wash.

Does my method of creating book covers work for everyone? Definitely not. It does work for me.

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Wrapping Up Loose Ends

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date June 9, 2023

As both a writer and a person growing old, I find more and more of my life is spent wrapping up loose ends. There are so many projects close to done waiting for those final bits of effort.

Why Not Finish Things?

Mostly projects get left behind when circumstances change. Another factor can be a change in life’s focus. And projects can lose their appeal, get boring.

Some projects do get done and then need repairs. Puppies do a lot of damage to quilts. Time to do those needed repairs never seems to get worked into the schedule so the project lingers, undone.

One I’m trying to make presentable as I will never fully finish it, is a tea cloth. What, you ask, is a tea cloth? Truthfully, I didn’t know when I started this project.

Shuttle tatting is slow. Real tatting thread is about the size of quilting thread. I prefer using size 30 thread as the result is still lacy, but I make progress faster. Many patterns do call for the larger thread. I did this tea cloth in separate parts as much as possible. To explain: the outside sets of three medalions have two smaller outside ones and a big one joining them. I tatted all of the smaller ones then did the bigger center one joining them into eight units. These were joined to the cloth when the chain around the inserts was done. The triangular tatted sections were completed and joined with the chain as well. The inserts were the last things to sew in.

Challenges

A friend taught me to tat when I was attending UCLA. I had these classes right after lunch and kept falling asleep. Tatting kept me awake, but left me able to take notes too.

Tatting is a way of making lace. I learned to use a shuttle, not the more modern needle tatting some people do now.

I enjoyed tatting, acquired books of patterns, made lots of stuff. Most tatting patterns are for bookmarks and doilies. I got bored and wanted a challenge.

There was my challenge, the picture in the center of a new book. Tea cloth. One hundred fifty different designs for the various parts. Perfect.

Wrapping Up Loose Ends

A tea cloth is a small tablecloth. My mostly finished one is six feet across. All the designs are done. The cloth inserts are tacked in.

There are some two thousand knots left to secure with a needle and clip ends. A good ironing is needed to take out the wrinkles. And neither will happen.

Instead, I am tacking my tea cloth between two clear plastic sheets. I want something different as a cloth under my book display and this will be it. After all, with forty years of off-and-on effort to get this far and a lack of anyplace else to show this off, it will now come out of the closet.

What Else?

Since this project is done, I need to tackle another one. There are two quilt tops in the cedar chest. The spool knitted throw needs puppy repairs.

And, maybe I’ll get around to wrapping up loose ends of writing projects sitting on my computer.

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Creating Teaching Units

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date May 19, 2023

As a teacher, I was always creating teaching units. Each chapter became one as I found or devised notes, work sheets, labs and more.

Once I started writing science books, this changed. The elements stayed the same. However, I could add so much more.

Trivia is interesting. My first science book “The Pumpkin Project” is full of fun facts about pumpkins.

cover of "The Pumpkin Project" by Karen GoatKeeper — This science activity book includes Investigations and Activites from pumpkin seeds to plants to pumpkins. Stories about growing pumpkins, recipes using pumpkins, puzzles about pumpkins, pumpkin trivia and more are in it too.

Telling Stories

The trivia led me on to other interesting things about pumpkins. Since I garden, I buy those little seed packets. This book let me find out how those seeds get into the packets.

Then there are the giant pumpkins. These are not the big Halloween kinds. These are the monsters grown by people around the world that can easily top a hundred pounds with records now over a ton! Who grows these and how? I asked and wrote a story about them.

Creating Puzzles

Teaching classes I often used worksheets. These didn’t seem to fit well in my science book. I put in puzzles instead.

There are sites online to create puzzles. I prefer to make my own. Hidden words, skeletons, tales, deduction and sayings are some of them.

“The City Water Project”

Writing about pumpkins was so interesting I looked over my teaching units and found some about water. There are so many interesting things about water, this substance we depend on, but take for granted.

Using the same model, the book has lots of trivia, stories, puzzles (including coloring pages), investigations and activities. Since this was not for a class lab, I could include some activities like boiling water in a paper boat that I couldn’t use in school.

Creating Teaching Units

Few people were interested in my science books. This was very disappointing to me. Part of it was that few people knew about them. Part of it was how much the books had to cost to cover printing costs.

I loved teaching science. I want others to discover how interesting science is. So I am trying to make my science books more accessible by making them into teaching units.

What I’ve discovered is that I can’t just break up a book into units. As I separate each part, I have to make sure my results and puzzle answers are there. Each has an introduction.

Summer is the time to play with water. Maybe some people will enjoy doing these Investigations, Activities and puzzles this summer and find out science can be fun.

Tags science activity books, science for students, summer science projects

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Annoying Details

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date May 12, 2023

Writing a rough draft for a novel is fairly straight forward for me. I start at the beginning and write through to the end ignoring all the little annoying details like facts as I write.

In “The Carduan Chronicles” Ship Eighteen drops out of the worm tunnel somewhere over the solar system. To reach Cardua (Earth), the ship must go toward and over the sun and on out the ecliptic. The time frame is fifteen weeks, their time or ninety days.

Over April the former drafts came together into one piece. The journey of the Arkosans soon to become Carduans after landing, is almost complete. All that remains is to merge the last week into the tale of Ship Nineteen.

This ship dropped out of the worm tunnel into a February ice storm and landed in an Ozark ravine. These nine Carduans have spent the fifteen weeks learning to live on this strange, new world.

Going the Distance

One of those annoying details for Ship Eighteen happens to concern their voyage. How long does it take to get to the sun? Or over the sun? Or on to Cardua?

This meant I needed to know how far apart the planets are from the sun and each other, how big the sun is and the revolution times for the planets. Writing the draft, I guessed.

Thanks to some library books I have more accurate figures now. What I do know for sure is that this is one speedy little ship. It travels a lot faster than any ship we’ve developed so far.

That’s one of the joys of writing science fiction, being able to make some things up. Even so, the ship’s journey must be consistent so those annoying details are important.

Another Draft

Once I have the voyage mapped out timewise, I get to write yet another draft for Ship Eighteen. One advantage is having much of the draft already written, only needing adjustment to the new times.

Ship Nineteen offers a new set of annoying details. I do tend to try to accomplish more in a day than time allows. Unfortunately for the Carduans and my draft, I tend to do the same for them.

The other consideration is the height of the Carduans: four inches. It is a real challenge to see an Ozark ravine from that height.

cover for "Capri Capers" by Karen GoatKeeper — Those annoying details came close to sinking this book. Harriet’s place abuts a national forest. Some of the action takes place on the forest roads. I finally had to devise a map of her place and the forest roads, then rewrite scenes so everything happened where it was supposed to.

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You Cannot Go Home

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date April 21, 2023

Everyone has memories, good and bad, of where they grew up. If the memories are good, it’s tempting to go back. However, you cannot go home again.

Nonsense? Think about it.

“Tell Me Three Things”

“Tell me Three Things” by Julie Buxbaum is my latest reading book. Josie, still grieving the death of her mother, has been uprooted, moved from a middle class Chicago neighborhood and school to Beverly Hills with a new stepmother and stepbrother and a posh private school. Talk about a tough learning curve.

Of course Josie is homesick, wants desperately to go home. After two months, she is given the chance to go home for a weekend. And in two months, everything has changed. Her best friend has a new best friend and a boyfriend. She no longer fits in, isn’t part of things there.

You can find my 5 star rating and a review of this book on my Goodreads page.

You Cannot Go Home Again

I grew up in southern California. People sometimes ask if I would ever want to move back. My answer is that my California doesn’t exist anymore.

I remember open meadows between Los Angeles and San Diego. There were grape vineyards with grapes laid out on paper between the rows during harvest. The beaches were empty of people during week days. A dairy with real cows and a bottling plant was a few miles away from my home.

None of that is there now. Houses and people have replaced all of it. Even my school, when I visited a year after graduating, was an alien place.

“The Carduan Chronicles”

My little Carduans are stranded 6,000 light years or so from their home. They have no means of ever going home.

How would you react if, suddenly, you were cut off from friends, family, home? These 60 Carduans are trying to cope with this while planning and creating a new life in an alien place.

For them the phrase you cannot go home again has taken on a terrible meaning. Yet life goes on. It changes, it takes on new dreams and new relationships.

cover of "Old Promises" Hazel Whitmore #2 by Karen GoatKeeper — “Old Promises” deals with moving to a new place. Hazel Whitmore grew up in New York City. She has been uprooted to the Missouri Ozarks to deal with relatives she has never met before, a rural life style and a new school. There is no going back to her old home. She is forced to create a new home.

You may not be able to go back, but you can create a new home.

Tags "Tell Me Three Things" by Julie Buxbaum, finding home, people change, places change

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Designing Book Covers

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date April 14, 2023

There are two things a prospective reader looks at first: title and cover. The title must sound interesting. But designing book covers is a real challenge for me.

My Challenges

Since I do my own covers, the design must be one I can draw. Animals and plants are much easier for me than people.

Photographs are a good source of ideas for me. So I want a design that can be partially photographed.

Cover Considerations

People seem to like seeing people on a cover. Some genres seem to require having people on it. “Hopes, Dreams and Reality” should have Mindy on the cover.

Since I try to put a book out as an eBook as well as a print book, the cover must be easily seen on a mobile screen as well as on a big cover. This is more challenging than you might think.

cover for "Waiting For Fairies" by Karen GoatKeeper — This cover began as photographs of mushrooms and a white deer-footed mouse. This was sketched onto drawing paper for painting with watercolor. This was then uploaded onto a computer and darkened.

Designing Book Covers

Nothing is more irritating about a book cover than when it has little or nothing to do with the book. DVD covers are notorious for this.

Publishing companies have a staff of cover designers. They send over a synopsis of a book. An artist comes up with a cover. The author is stuck with it.

This doesn’t concern me as I self publish. The reasons are many and I might address them another time. It does leave me doing the writing, editing, illustrating and designing book covers, then trying to do marketing so readers will notice my little book among the thousands of other titles published each year.

“Hopes, Dreams and Reality”

As with the title, I had to do a lot of thinking about the cover. It was so tempting to find a cover looking at a sunrise or goats or chickens. Anything but Mindy.

But Mindy needs to be on the cover. She needs to be fighting the storm.

That left me putting on a show out in the yard. Luckily we have no neighbors. I got to set up my camera on delay, press the button and race over to pose holding my umbrella as though fighting wind and rain as the sun lit up the yard.

I needed a rain slicker, but don’t own one. Oh, well.

Maybe I am now ready to take my fast sketch and do a real design. And the watercolors will get used again.

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Writing Projects

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date April 7, 2023

How many writing projects in progress at the same time are too many? I’m trying to find out, I guess.

Writing Projects List

At present I have two science projects going. One is rewriting “The City Water Project” as teaching units. The other is writing units for “The Chemistry Project”.

There are also two novels. “Hopes, Dreams and Reality” is being looked over by some friends before I do a final rewrite and edit. In the meantime, I am brainstorming cover ideas.

And I am trying to finish the draft for “The Carduan Chronicles: Arrival” Since I haven’t worked on this one since last October, this entails reading through seventy pages of manuscript trying to not do a total rewrite to get back into the story.

Then there is the idea for a picture book. I have the idea, the setting, possible characters and the perfect candidate for a character model in mind.

This bloodroot flower is one of the first Ozark wildflowers to bloom. Even though the Dent County Flora page is complete, I still enjoy seeing them and can’t resist taking another picture.

Is This Enough?

I don’t think so. It is wildflower season once again. That means the “Dent County Flora” books are again open.

Already I’m trying to get out walking and have even completed pictures for a plant to enter into the “Dent County Blues” book. Another tree, a new one, has bloomed and I only need to get some seed pictures and the tree picture to complete it.

The Virginia bluebells page for the Dent County Flora is done. But I saw this plant in bloom and loved this view showing the side of the flower as well as how the flowers staart out one color and usually turn blue as they open. I have found plants whee the flowers stay pink.

Getting Books Off the Writing Projects List

The only project close to being done is “Hopes, Dreams and Reality”. If I can keep to schedule – and I’ve already overshot it, the book will be published in May.

“The City Water Project” teaching units are supposed to be done in May. I will get them done as it is mostly just adjusting the book into pieces and changing some explanations.

The problem with these units is setting up yet another account, this one with teacherspayteachers, to sell them. Since I am already juggling accounts with Amazon, Smashword, IngramSpark, Goodreads, Pinterest, NaNo (National Novel Writing), iNaturalist and Flickr (also new), my five to six hours a week of internet time is spread very thin.

Justification: I’m not bored.

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Finishing Novel Drafts

Post author By Karen GoatKeeper
Post date March 31, 2023

“Hopes, Dreams and Reality” is finished. Or is it? Finishing novel drafts is tricky.

The first rough draft is only an outline of a story. It allows the writer to create characters, try out plotlines and subplots and follow the story to an ending. My rough drafts are often a mess and only expand on my novel idea.

Enter the First Draft

That leads to a rewritten draft. This is my first real draft. By now I know my characters fairly well. That means I know how they will react in a given situation which can totally nix a plot.

If the plot won’t work with these characters, I have two choices. I can create new characters for the plot, if I like the plot. Or I can rewrite the plot to suit the characters, if I am happy with them.

One way or the other, I am finishing novel drafts to this point. And this draft may sound really good. Maybe good enough to keep?

Probably not. And the truth is in writing a second draft. This is not a carbon copy of the first draft, although they may be very similar.

My new novel seems to finally have a title:”Hopes, Dreams and Reality”. The draft is done and only needs a final read through. Finishing novel drafts is more a decision to stop tweaking than a lack of things to tweak.

Going For That Second Draft

My method is to make a copy of the first draft. Then I retype this draft one chapter at a time.

As I retype the draft, I think about it. What’s missing? Description? Explanation? A scene?

What doesn’t work? Is there too much description? Does something not make sense?

Does the ending belong? Or is it too over the top? Is all the groundwork laid for it?

Finishing Novel Drafts

How many more drafts will I write? Any after the second one will probably be pretty close to that one. Should I stop?

No matter how many drafts a writer does, there are things to change. A sentence sounds rough. The grammar stinks. These go on and on appearing with each reading.

I am to that point with “Hopes, Dreams and Reality” now. This is a new type of novel for me so I have asked a couple of friends to look it over. Then I will read through it once again.

In the meantime, I am returning to Cardua. Then I can look at this novel with fresh eyes.

Tags novel editing, novel writing