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Creating Carduans

When the idea for the Carduan Chronicles first occurred to me, all I knew was that a space ship would appear during an ice storm, land in an Ozark ravine and leave the occupants trying to survive. The next task was creating Carduans.

Creating Carduans started with creating their ship
Carduan Ship 19 appeared during an ice storm which forced it to land. On the way down, it had to maneuver between trees in the ravine.

How Big?

There were several considerations. I went hiking through a number of Ozark ravines trying to spot places a space ship could land. A flat area was not a problem as bluff rocks stick out in many places. However, they are small.

Ravines have trees growing in them. The ship had to be small enough to avoid them.

The final size of the space ship was thirty inches long, eighteen inches wide and high. These Carduans had to fit inside. Four inches tall worked.

Ship 19 has landed
Creating Carduans depended on them being small. They must blend in to avoid unwanted attention.

Physical Appearance

I now had a height for creating Carduans. They had heads, arms, legs, feet and hands. Obviously, these were small and fingers would be very slender. There would be three fingers so the Carduans would count in threes and sixes.

Of course, the Carduans could just be tiny people with a few minor changes. That didn’t suit me. How would they be different?

Many creatures on Earth have blue blood. It is not based on iron which is what makes our blood red. If the Carduans had blue blood, they would be blue.

An interesting article about chickens showed up. It seems chickens have retina cells sensitive to five different color wavelengths. Insects often see in ultraviolet.

Setting Up Arkosa

The Carduans come from the planet Arkosa. I picture this planet as dry, hot, bathed in ultraviolet light. Plants would have fall colors as the pigments for these colors can deal with ultraviolet light for photosynthesis.

Seeing ultraviolet would be an advantage. Having a third eyelid to counter intense glare or shield from dust would be another advantage.

My Carduans

So, in creating Carduans, I had to consider the setting and the origins of these creatures. This was for Ship Nineteen. But, the same creatures are also on Ship Eighteen.

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Tongue Twisters

How many times have you called an office or been called and found the receptionist barely understandable? It’s frustrating. I wish I could tell them to get a book of tongue twisters.

Aren’t tongue twisters a children’s game? Children think so. Who can say one the fastest? Who can think of one?

Love of Goats tongue twister
Try saying this tongue twister three times fast. It is a good way to begin with these verbal challenges.

What Is a Tongue Twister?

The key to a tongue twister is alliteration, the repeat of the same sound in a series of words. Such alliteration can be used in various ways in literature as well as tongue twisters.

“The Bells” and “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe both use alliteration. In the first one, the sounds bring out the sounds of the bells. In the second, it forms internal rhymes tying the poem together.

For children, there are some old ones: Peter Piper picked a peck of pickles; She sells sea shells by the seashore; Rubber Baby Buggy Bumpers. Can you say these three times quickly and not trip over your tongue and be understandable?

For Love of Goats tongue twister
All the words in this tongue twister may begin with the letter D, but the vowel after them makes you say them differently.

What Value Do They Have?

The big value is teaching pronunciation. When learning a new one, each word must be said slowly, enunciated carefully. Once the words are mastered, speed is introduced.

No matter how fast a child says these, they must be understandable. This is the value of them. And the reason I wish some receptionists I deal with would get a book of them.

More Goat tongue twister fun
As you say this tongue twister, feel how your mouth must change shape to form these words. To say it fast three times, your mouth must move fast too.

Another value is confidence. A child who gets good at tongue twisters has something to be proud of and build confidence at mastering difficult things.

And these word games are fun.

Writing Tongue Twisters

I have loved alliteration all my life. It gives shape to the sounds of words and language. Another aspect and game would be finding homonyms.

A castrated male goat is a wether. The conditions outside is weather. Making a choice involves whether.

The three became a little story about goats. This led to more. My result was “For Love of Goats”. What will your result be?

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Creating Characters

Some novels begin with a plot. Others begin with a character. But all novels require creating characters.

Where do these fictional characters come from? How does a writer find these characters?

cover for "Broken Promises" by Karen GoatKeeper
This is the only novel I have written that uses a person I once knew. He is in the book the way he was when I knew him. He is now deceased.

Asking For Trouble

Even some famous authors like Hemmingway got into trouble by using their friends, acquaintances and enemies as characters in their novels. If they were lucky, they just had to find new friends. Unlucky writers ended up being sued.

Having written this, I do base my characters on people I know, have read about or seen. But, I don’t use the people exactly. Instead I look at some trait or traits these people have and build a character around them, one that is not the original person.

cover of "Old Promises" Hazel Whitmore #2 by Karen GoatKeeper
When I was doing a practical teaching course, I noticed a student who was extremely shy. Who was she? I never found out. Yet, she became the model for Hazel’s friend in this book.

Creating Characters Exercise

Next time you are out and about, look at the people around you. These people are strangers. You know nothing about them, really.

Pick out one. What do you think this person is like? Do they work? Invent a personality for this person. How would this person fit into a story or novel?

cover for "Dora's Story" by Karen GoatKeeper
Names were a big challenge in “Dora’s Story” as there were goat shows and every exhibitor and goat needed a name.

What’s In a Name?

I hate finding names for my characters most of the time. Now and then a character just has a name, but this isn’t usually the case.

Usually, the name search takes time and persistence. There are online lists. Books, telephone books, old school annuals are all places to look.

Several factors need consideration. One is the time frame of the novel. Names change in popularity or even existence over the years. Nova is not a possibility for an eighteenth century novel.

Plus, the name needs to be one the writer is comfortable with. I tend to like two and three syllable names. There’s no real reason, but I am happier with characters with names of these lengths.

cover for "Capri Capers" by Karen GoatKeeper
As this was a fun novel, the names had to be fun. Roscoe Rascal, Dan Janus, even Harriet Zeigenhert which is German for goat.

Names Can Change

No matter how detailed a writer is creating characters, things including names can change as the plot evolves. New traits will emerge in the characters. They will become like people you know well.

A great compliment was paid me talking with a woman about Life’s Rules. I was describing Stephanie, my main character. The woman thought she was a real person, someone she wanted to meet.

Creating characters is important for a writer and compliments like this one make the effort worth while.

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Writing Illustrated Books

A lot of authors are writing illustrated books now. Perhaps these books are popular because people love to watch television and movies and find books of nothing but words boring.

Of course, books for very young readers are filled with pictures. Some have no text at all or very little. As these readers get older, they may like to have those pictures.

I came across such a book. “Matilda” by Roald Dahl seems like a typical book and has an interesting story. What sets it apart are the illustrations by Quentin Blake scattered through the text telling the story.

Writing illustrated books like Ducks Love Hats
Picture books are a kind of illustrated book. “Ducks Love Hats” has no text so the images form the story.

What Are Illustrated Books?

Picture books are listed as illustrated books. These books are in a special category as the pictures tell the story. Even if there is text, the pictures convey the story.

An illustrated book uses pictures to augment the story. Usually, if all of the pictures are removed, the text would tell the story.

"For Love of Goats" is an illustrated book
This image from “For Love of Goats” goes with the entry for E for Electric Fence, but the text is needed to explain what is happening. This is an illustrated book.

Graphic novels are a third type of illustrated books. They trace back to comic books, but now tell much more elaborate stories. These use the pictures to tell the story, but have text and dialogue to add details. Removing the pictures removes the story, just as removing the text would. Both must be there.

Writing Illustrated Books

How an author approaches writing such a book depends on the type of book. Picture books are primarily pictures. When I write a picture book, I see it as a series of pictures. Any text is added later, although I may write out the text before beginning to draw the sketches.

In an illustrated book the pictures are an afterthought. As I write about Ship Eighteen of the Carduan Chronicles, I know I want to have illustrations heading each chapter. The pictures aren’t necessary, however, they will enhance the story.

I have read several graphic novels. It is an interesting format, but one I haven’t used.

Instead, I will continue writing illustrated books mostly as picture books.

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Setting Reading Goals

I don’t think much about setting reading goals. Every year seems to be set for 70 books as that is about how many I read over the year.

There is a secondary goal. My home bookshelves are full of books. Out of the 70 total, I like to read at least 40 from my own shelves.

Picture Books

My reading goal does not include picture books normally. If I added these, my goal would be 370 books over the year.

There are so many wonderful picture books available. I do limit my selection to those I can check out of my library. Evergreen expands my library shelves to include libraries all over southern Missouri.

Reaching Reading Goals

As I found out this past year, life can really upset everything. I started last year intending to write several books and read 72 books.

Disaster struck in July. Most writing stopped. Reading stopped. A few months went by.

Setting reading goals helped. I do like to get to that reading total. There were a half dozen picture books to fill in at the end, but I did make my set goal.

January Again

So, here I am at the beginning of a new year of possibilities. Will disaster strike again? Maybe, but I won’t act like it will.

My reading goal will still be 70 books. I will still read those six picture books each week.

This year’s Library Review theme is the states. January is Washington, D.C. and used “First Ladies: An Intimate Group Portrait of First Wives” by Margaret Truman, a book I highly recommend along with some others.

February involves the New England states. The central book is “Of Time and Turtles” by Sy Montgomery, a fascinating look at the world of turtles and turtle rescue based in Massachusetts. There is the Tia Lola series set in Vermont and a new to me mystery series set in New Hampshire as well.

These won’t count for my new reading goal as I have to read ahead to do the reviews. But books on the South, Southwest, Midwest, Plains, West, Northwest, California, Alaska, Hawaii and Puerto Rico (U.S. Protectorate) will count.

Setting reading goals only adds a little incentive to read. The real incentives are all those books, books that look so interesting and appealing, waiting for me to read them.

The Salem Public Library, Salem, Missouri, does put their newsletter online.

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New Pumpkin Project Book

When “The Pumpkin Project” was written, I went to a local printer and had a couple of boxes of books printed. Those books are almost gone as is the printer. Now there will be a new “Pumpkin Project” book.

Germinating pumpkin seeds
Does the direction a seed faces matter? How about how deep the seeds are planted? How does a seed germinate? These and other investigations try to answer these questions in the Pumpkin Project.

What Is the Pumpkin Project?

This is a science activity book and more. Although it was written for those 10 to 15 in mind, others can enjoy it too.

The basic part surrounds the 19 Investigations and 2 Projects. These begin by looking at seeds, then germination and growing pumpkins. Of course, jack 0’lanterns are one of the projects.

The Pumpkin Stories tell about the history, seed packets, growing giant pumpkins and canning pumpkins. Puzzles are scattered throughout the book including mazes, searches, codes and more.

Recipes for cooking up pumpkins end the book. These are still tasty. I do keep making them from time to time to make sure. After all, pumpkin cookies are my favorite.

Painted Jack o'Lantern
One of the Pumpkin Project projects is to create a jack o’lantern. Directions are for painting and carving a pumpkin.

Changes

Editing a book, especially one as big as the “Pumpkin Project” at over 200 pages isn’t easy. Mistakes slip by. I fixed a lot of these.

Nothing much else changed. I worked on this book for several years, doing and redoing the Investigations. Research took time along with several trips to gather information and pictures.

Missouri State Champion Giant Pumpkin
Growing giant pumpkins takes dedication. This one was 878.5 pounds. Find out more about growing these giants in the Pumpkin Project.

What About the New Pumpkin Project Book?

The biggest changes will be in the cover. My original book has a spiral binding, one I like. Unfortunately, such bindings are only available from private printers and mine has moved to St. Louis.

That leaves me choosing between a paper cover or a hardback cover. Hardbacks are nice, but expensive. This is not a cheap book to print as it is so long and in color. I will have to choose paperback.

Will the price change? Probably. How much? I won’t know until I get the book printed.

The new Pumpkin Project book will be done and out soon.

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Novel Writing Time

December brings the end of a calendar year. Perhaps January starts off that year you plan to use for novel writing.

You know. That idea you’ve kicked around for years saying someday you will write a novel or a memoir – something.

phot idea for novel writing time
When I began writing “Dora’s Story”, the entire premise of the book unrolled for me in a short time of thinking about telling the story of a girl and her goat. But the link between goats and their owners was nothing new. I saw it at the Phelps County Fair getting pictures for “Goat Games”. This is a young Oberhasli doe with her proud owner.

Bad Reason for Novel Writing

You’re tired of your day job. Writing can make you a fortune. All you need to do is write that best seller.

Over a million new books are published every year. The chances of a debut novel becoming that gold mine are so slim it would take a microscope to see them.

Dora's Story novel writing time introduced Emily and Dora
As I developed the plot, Dora’s Story became a novel in six parts. The first one introduced Emily and Dora.

Good Reason for Novel Writing

There is that idea you can’t ignore. It’s a plot or a character or a wish to tell your family who you are and where you came from.

This thing is there when you wake up, whenever you stop during the day and puts you to sleep at night. It’s begging you to write it.

Dora's Story ending
As Dora moves from owner to owner and Emily searches for her, years go by. This brought in another aspect of novel writing: time passage. Finally, Dora ends up with Shawn.

Getting Ready

First, you will need a time to write. It can be the half hour before you go to bed or when you get up. Perhaps it is while you eat lunch.

Different people are most awake and ready to write at different times. Find that time for yourself and try to write then. If nothing else, write down notes so you can use them for writing later.

Second, you will need a place to write. This doesn’t need to be fancy or a whole room. It can be just enough room for your notebook or your laptop.

One essential thing in this place is being able to turn off the email, the phone, the interruptions for that bit of time. Once you start novel writing, you want to finish the thought you are working on and interruptions will make it fly out the window often to never return.

Barbara Rissler, Price o'the Field Nubians, with a Nubian doe. Love of goats continues.
I could see how much Barbara Rissler loved her Nubians as I visited her while writing Goat Games. In Dora’s Story, Emily searches for several years and her love for Dora keeps her going. In the end, she must make hard decisions about Dora.

Most Importantly

This novel writing is for you, no one else. Yes, readers matter once the novel is done, but the writing is for you.

And expect that first draft to stink. That’s what rewriting fixes.

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Reading Picture Books

This year I’ve been reading a lot of picture books. This has given me a lot of ideas about writing my own.

Yes, I have written a few of my own (“Waiting for Fairies”, “The Little Spider” and “At the Laundromat”) as well as collaborating on “Ducks Love Hats”. However, new ideas help with planning new ones because writing picture books is fun and challenging.

Reading picture books can be different
In “The Little Spider” I used the text to mimic how the little spider goes up various things only to come back down with the text doing the same.

Planning Picture Book Text

Books for adults are little more than text. Picture books are mostly about the pictures. The amount of text can vary from none to a short story with illustrations.

Reading picture books without text
“Ducks Love Hats” has no text so the illustrations must tell the story. These are challenging to create, but can get a child’s imagination to work.

If there is no or very little text, the illustrations must tell the story. I like this approach and often try to use it. A number of authors do this.

“Wolf in the Snow”, “Tuesday” and Mr. Wuffles” are good examples of picture books with no text. Another technique is used in “The Most Boring Book Ever” where the text and the illustrations tell related stories. The stories give lots of play to a child’s imagination, although the illustrations do have a narrative sequence.

A baby goat kid used as a model for a picture book
I work from photographs when I do illustrations for a picture book. Two projects start with baby kids so I have pictures of baby kids.

Other picture books are really stories with pictures. These stories can be read without the illustrations and do well. The illustrations only back up the tale.

Most picture books fall in between these. Some, like ones by Jan Brett, can combine the two. Her main story is an illustrated one. Her sidebars can tell another story than is related to the main one.

Another goat kid pose
It can be hard to get perspective right so I use many pictures from many angles. The different kids over the years give me a lot of material to work from.

Picture Book Illustrations

Reading picture books shows what a wide range the illustrations can have. They can be little more than line drawings with color to illustrations good enough to hang in an art gallery.

The youngest readers haven’t had an art education yet and so accept this wide range easily. They can even help the readers develop an appreciation of various art styles.

Highly detailed illustrations can encourage the reader to study them to find all the details. Doing this makes the reader slow down and actually see the illustration instead of glancing over it.

What Will I Do?

I’m not sure yet. With my first two picture books, the text came first and the illustrations were planned to show the text. In the book about Agate, I have no text yet. All I see are the illustrations.

Reading Picture Books

One thing reading many of these books does tell the writer is that each one is approached separately. Even those part of a series with a standard illustrative approach must be done separately to become a successful book.

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My Reading Goal

Bleak December, the last month of the year has arrived. With all the hustle and bustle, there are so many things to wrap up. My reading goal is one.

This year started looking like a normal year. I set a goal of 72 books. Then disaster arrived.

My Goats

My ten-year-old buck, High Reaches Silk’s Augustus, got sick. It was terminal and I had to say good-bye. His pen looked so forlorn.

Dairy goats must have kids to continue to give milk. Terrill Creek Huckleberry came home. He was a love, just a wonderful buck. Somewhere he found and ate something poisonous and died.

Then my beloved Agate got sick. No matter what I did, she kept getting worse. When she finally collapsed, unable to stand, I had to say good-bye to her too.

Nubian doe High Reaches Agate in pasture
Nubian doe High Reaches Pixie’s Agate was a good friend. If I called the goats out in pasture, she led them in. She stopped on the way out for neck and ear scratches. I miss her.

My Family

My goats are my family. They have been my companions through several moves and over fifty years. All of them are special. Three have been extra special: Jennifer, my first goat; Bridget, my traveling companion; and Agate, my bottle baby.

Reading and writing almost ceased for months. That leaves me now, in December, seventeen books away from my set goal.

Making the Goal

I do read fairly fast, especially light fiction. But not that fast. At present I have just finished “First Ladies: An Intimate Group Portrait of White House Wives” by Margaret Truman. This is a wonderful look at the job of being First Lady and how many different approaches by women of so many different backgrounds did this job.

Three books are ongoing. “Five Little Peppers and How They Grew” is one I read as a child. It is very much a portrait of growing up poor around 1900, although it is fiction. “Arsene Lupin Gentleman Thief” was mentioned in “The Cat Who Saved the Library” along with “Moby Dick” (read the abridged version!) and “The Three Musketeers”.

Third is “Of Time and Turtles”. This is a fascinating look at turtle rescue and turtles. These creatures have existed for 350 million years, yet modern humans may destroy these special, unique animals by greed, carelessness and ignorance.

If all else fails, I suppose I can count picture books. I read and review (on my Goodreads blog) about six a week. I do hate to not make my reading goal.

When I finish reading a book, I do a review on Goodreads. The picture books are reviewed on my Goodreads blog.

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Timing in Writing

Timing is so important in a novel. I forgot that when I wrote about Ship 18. Now I have done the math and must change most of the plot.

cover for "Dora's Story" by Karen GoatKeeper
This novel was my first real brush with timing. It took place over several years with several events repeating over the years with people and goats growing older. And I lost a year. Putting that year back in was a big mess.

Originally

The premise was of a space ship dropping out of a worm tunnel somewhere between Mars and Jupiter. The ship must cross much of the solar system to get to Earth which they call Cardua.

Of course crossing over the Sun would be the most exciting time of the novel and I gave it big play. But it had no basis other than my imagination.

Doing the Math

I had looked up the planetary distances, orbits, sizes etc. before beginning. Looking them up doesn’t mean I paid much attention to them, although I should have.

Finally, I sat down and did the math. I knew the size of the ship (30 inches long) and figured a speed (5 million miles a day). Starting at Earth, I calculated where the ship would be each 6 day week (The Carduans have three fingers and count by sixes.).

My guess work was so far off, it was ludicrous. Since timing is everything in this novel, I had to redo everything according to the calculated journey.

Big Solar System

When I taught science, I took a class outside to a long sidewalk. We marked out distances to the planets on it. I guess I forgot just how big the solar system is.

My Ship 18, on its fictional journey, would spend most of the 15 weeks getting from its original position to Earth’s orbit, although Earth would still be on the other side of the Sun. Anyone who has ever been on a long journey riding along knows how boring this can be.

And now all the exciting events in the first draft are relegated to the last few weeks. Instead, I have eleven weeks of boredom to fill up. But, timing is everything in this novel.