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Plotting Goat Shows

People seem to love showing off things and animals. Goats are no exception which means there are goat shows.

These events occur in Dora’s Story. Emily’s mother wants the recognition of winning them. The girls want to take part as members of their 4-H club. There are two big shows close to them and they attend both.

using goat shows for plotting goat shows
This is an old picture from the first Arkansas state goat show in 1981. The class is for Nubian doelings. Note the whites then the official wear for those showing goats.

Why Have Goat Shows?

I only took my goats to the local county shows. I led a couple of 4-H goat Projects and the shows were part of this.

We held the shows for several reasons. One was for the members to show off their goats. More importantly the judges could help them recognize the strong and weak points of their goats.

The public was the other big reason for holding these little shows. Many people know little about goats and many times what they know is wrong.

This isn’t their fault. Goats are fun to make fun of. Brush goats do tend to have long goatees and big horns. Goats do butt each other and other things. Horns are a great way to tear delicious bark off of trees.

Buck goats (male goats in the dairy goat world) do reek during mating season. Does (female goats in the dairy goat world) do not.

If produced properly, goat milk tastes good. It is also better balanced for human consumption than cow’s milk.

Phelps County Fair goat show
Phelps County Fair has a goat show. Back around 2006 most of the goats shown were dairy goats. This is an Oberhasli sometimes called a Swiss Alpine. Note the show clip and how the goat is set up with front feet across from each other, back feet set directly under the tail and the collar used to keep the goat’s head up, but not straining.

Dora’s Story Goat Shows

The shows in this novel are much bigger shows. I have attended several of these bigger shows as a spectator.

These shows have several goat breeds and several classes for each breed. There are showmanship classes for young goat owners.

In plotting these shows for the novel, I had to list all of the classes, all of the goats in each of the classes and the names and ages of the owners of these goats. This took at least a page of notes.

To complicate this, the same shows occur annually. They show up more than once in the novel. That meant aging the owners and their goats, adding some new owners and goats.

Much of this material was not used in the novel. Emily and her sister showed Nubians and grades only. But they did talk to many of the other owners.

Novel background notes are like that. The notes make writing the novel easier and the result better. But that doesn’t mean all of the notes appear in the novel.

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Dora’s Story Characters

It was September and I wanted a story line to write in November when the idea came. The plot would revolve around a dairy goat moving between several different owners. Then I began creating the Dora’s Story characters.

cover for "Dora's Story" by Karen GoatKeeper
After writing a number of straight plotline novels, this was very different. There was the novel plotline. Yet each of the six parts had a plotline for itself and as part of the novel one. It involved several goat shows and each of these changed as the participants got older. It took over a year to get all of it right.

Who Are They?

From the time my first goat, Jennifer, was born, I’ve met many people with goats. Others I’ve heard of. These were the beginnings of my Dora’s Story characters.

The goat would come from a small time breeder. Her first owner would be Emily. Why would this young girl get a goat? Why would she give up her goat?

This brought in her mother and sister. For the girls, the goats were 4-H projects and pets. The mother wanted the prestige of purebred goats and Dora was a grade goat.

Once sold, Dora went through several owners. Each was a composite of people. One was a bad owner. Another was ill. Finally Dora ends up with a young boy.

Going In Circles

Emily was devastated when Dora was sold. Her dream was to find Dora again. In the original draft, she does.

As years pass, people change. Emily grew up. So did Dora.

Emily wanted to get Dora back as though this would make everything like it was. Long ago I learned you can’t go back except in memories. Such an ending would not be at all realistic.

Yet, Emily did need to find Dora again. But she needed to find her beloved goat in a new time, under the new conditions.

Dora’s Story Characters

Each step of the way, Dora is a possible way to the future for each owner. Some take advantage of this. Some don’t.

We are often blind to or afraid of opportunities that come our way. They pass us by. When it is too late, we realize we went past them, now regretting it.

Carpe Diem.

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Entering Writing Contests

Entering writing contests is not my favorite thing to do. That doesn’t keep me from looking at them.

There are lots of these contests. Many have nice prizes. I know writers who do enter them and get to put “Award Winning” on their book.

Reasons For Contests

There seems to be lots of different reasons for writing contests. Publishers use them as a way to find books they might like to publish. These usually want a complete manuscript.

Writer sites are expensive to operate. They can hold contests as a way to raise funds.

Writer’s Digest magazine holds numerous contests. They seem to both promote writers and raise interest in subscribing to the magazine. Attending their writers’ conference is one of the big prizes.

Tempting Prizes

My writing budget always seems to be slim. That makes cash prizes very tempting.

Attending a conference isn’t possible for me. I self publish and, although being traditionally published is tempting, don’t really expect to go that route.

Choosing Contests

Entering writing contests can be a way for me to support a writing group. That is the main reason I do enter a contest.

My only two at this time are NaNo (National Novel Writing Month) and Arts Rolla. The first is mostly a way to write my way through a draft and isn’t a formal contest. There are supporting sponsors who offer prizes for those who meet their goals.

The latter is a local fine arts group. When I was part of a local writer’s group, now disbanded, I met many of the people involved with the group. It is an important local group.

Now I’m considering another contest. It’s put on as a money raiser for an online group. I’m new to the group and want to become more a part of it.

Facing Reality

Entering writing contests is not something I do expecting to win. When Arts Rolla awarded the first chapter of The Carduan Chronicles second place, I was shocked.

This new contest is for the first page of an unpublished novel. I have three to choose from. I would like to help support this group Great Gutsy Novelists. Are any of them good enough?

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Carpe Diem Seize the Day

Autumn Cornwell really struck a chord in “Carpe Diem” with me. I use lists a lot. Her main character, Vassar Spore, creates her life in lists of things she wants to accomplish.

My lists have a different purpose. They are lists of things to accomplish, but are tasks needing to be done rather than life goals.

In the Book “Carpe Diem”

Vassar is 16 and in stiff competition to be valedictorian for her high school class. She plans to take AP courses over the summer in pursuit of a 5.3 GPA on a 4 point scale.

Her life goals include being valedictorian, attending Vassar College, marrying a blond surgeon and writing a Pulitzer Prize book. She is a super achiever.

My Lists

To Do lists are so boring. Mine include chores, watering garden, cleaning out the barn, making cheese, cleaning house. Mundane goals for a quiet life.

My life goals are equally modest now. I want to finish a couple of books I’m working on. And I want to finally get my website organized and attracting visitors who will buy my books.

Life Intervenes

Vassar’s goals are upended with a phone call by Grandma Gerd. Suddenly her AP courses are gone as she will be in Southeast Asia for the summer.

Instead of Latin, Vassar will be writing a novel for AP credit. From the pieces put into the book, she will be rewriting and editing for years.

In addition, Vassar is trying to find out why her parents let Grandma Gerd blackmail them into sending her off for the summer. Even though she is constantly getting into trouble, usually her own fault, she does find the answer.

Carpe diem? Not these goats hiding in the barn from the horseflies.
My Nubian goats have discovered the old cow barn. Now that the horseflies are out, the herd goes out the pasture gate and straight to the cow barn to wait out the day. I see them sneak out from time to time to graze.

For me, I write in the morning just after milking. I’m awake and thinking about the plot. The other things happen in the afternoon.

Except the temperatures are now too hot to work outside by noon. So I am doing the work in the mornings and trying to write in the afternoons when I am tired, hot and wishing I could do nothing.

“Carpe Diem”

Seize the Day. Vassar is so busy making her lists, she forgets what is happening each day. How many of us do this?

It’s hard to stop trying to live in the past or the future, yet we can do neither. We can only live today. Planning is great. However, don’t let it rob you of your life.

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Writing Book Reviews

Writing book reviews is becoming big business. There are numerous websites and people who do reviews professionally.

As an author, I see lots of advice for authors. One mainstay is finding people to review your book so you can use the reviews, if they are favorable, in your book promotions.

Review Guidelines

Supposedly the author is not to pay for book reviews. This might be considered as a way to buy good reviews, deserved or not.

Amazon wants a reviewer to first purchase the book from them in order to leave a review. Since the company makes money from selling books, not reviews, this is understandable. It also makes it hard for anyone else to leave a review.

cover for "Capri Capers" by Karen GoatKeeper
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Review Considerations

I write book reviews. However, there are genres I am not qualified for writing book reviews as I rarely to never read those genres.

People who read only one genre might be considered good book reviewers for that genre. It also makes it harder for a new author as their book will be compared to all the other books in that genre.

Giving copies of a book to a reviewer can taint the view of a resulting review. As I don’t buy books, but borrow them from the library or pull them off my own shelves, I am limited in which books I can review. My personal stash is old, some going back fifty years and difficult to obtain any more.

Doing Ratings

Goodreads, where I post my reviews, has a five star system for rating a book. It usually suffices.

The biggest drawback in this system for me is that five stars says a book is amazing. Even three stars which should be a so so rating says I liked the book. That leaves me writing book reviews with ratings of mostly four stars.

Another drawback is that it asks for a single rating. A book can be very well written and still be one you did not enjoy, maybe even loathed. My work around is to give a second rating in the comment section.

Review Tyranny

Another big drawback to the rating/review requirement for books is how people are coerced into thinking a book with a lower rating or few reviews isn’t worth their reading time. Any book, no matter how good, has readers who don’t like the book and can lower the rating for the book.

Then there are those who read a book and leave no reviews. The author and the book are at their mercy in today’s marketplace. And the reader let them down.

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Wild Capri Capers

We were watching some old Rin Tin Tin movie serials and I wondered if I could write a serial about a goat. Every episode ends with a cliff hanger, so a wild Capri Capers took shape.

Movie Serials

When movies started and were only shown in theaters, the theaters wanted a way to keep people coming back every week. The movie serial was born.

These serials lasted for weeks with a melodrama plot. Each episode was full of action and ended with something dangerous happening leaving the hero or heroine in mortal danger.

The following week the dangerous happening was shown again with changes. Those changes let the hero or heroine survive to continue the plot only to again get into a dangerous situation.

cover for "Capri Capers" by Karen GoatKeeper
Begun as a lark and an experiment, Capri Capers was such fun it became a book.

Melodramas

These are simple plays. They normally have three main characters: a hero, a heroine or damsel in distress and a villain. The villain had some dastard scheme to capture the heroine and was foiled by the hero.

My father and his friends made up these plays up every week while he was in high school. They put on the plays for the students during lunch every Friday. My father always played the villain.

Proper protocol had the audience greet the hero with cheers and the villain with hisses and boos. At graduation all the students booed my father in honor of his years playing the villain.

Wild Capri Capers

The original draft of Capri Capers was in true movie serial format. Every chapter ended with a cliff hanger. The next chapter looked at the cliff hanger and solved it before launching the plot into the next cliff hanger.

Every name was chosen like a melodrama name. Dan Janus is after the two faced Roman god. Leroy Rogue and Roscoe Rascal are the villains. Harriet Zeigenhirt’s last name is German for goat.

The final draft changed the cliff hanger repeats into a more familiar novel plot line. However, the cliff hangers are still ending the chapters of a wild Capri Capers tale.

Oh, yes, there is a goat, several goats in the story. Capri is a goat and plays a big part in the story.

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Menu Planning

I’m reading a fun book now called “The Wild Robot” by Peter Brown in which a robot is marooned on an island. Being a robot, she doesn’t eat so Brown is saved the problem of menu planning.

On the other hand, my Carduans are alive and do eat. They need to explore their ravine and find foods they find palatable and obtainable.

Plant Menu Planning

Since the Carduans arrive in the ravine in mid February, their plant choices are very limited. Most plants are dormant until the weather warms up. The plantains, chickweed and dandelions I see in my garden are not often seen in the ravines as they are alien plants, although they emigrated here in colonial times.

As the weeks go by, the weather warms and lots of plants start to appear. The action takes place over fifteen six-day weeks, so there is a time frame.

My research covers when different plants appear, grow and bloom. Then the question is whether they are edible. Some like yellow rocket are edible, but bitter. Water cress is edible, but an acquired taste. Spicebush and redbud blooms are tasty, but hard to reach for the Carduans.

Menu planning for squirrel
Although a squirrel would be a good meal for the Carduans, catching one is quite a different matter. Squirrels are bigger than they are and easily climb trees. They are also fierce fighters.

Meat Menu Planning

The Carduans are omnivores, eating both plants and animals. However, the Carduans are limited in what animals they can tackle.

People think of deer or wild turkey. These are far too big for the Carduans to tackle. Even rabbits are bigger than they are.

The most available creatures small enough for the Carduans to tackle are mice, voles, minnows and crawdads, possibly moles, chipmunks and squirrels. Since the permanent camp they establish is near what they call a river and we call a creek, minnows and crawdads are easily found. The others are harder to find.

One other source of food is one most people would avoid: insects. Many insects are edible, the right size and, during warm months, available.

Menu planning for such small characters is challenging. It forces me to think outside the box.

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Rainy Weather

Ozark springs are usually filled with rainy weather. After a time, the rain gets to be annoying. However, those days will be lookied back on longingly during hot, dry summer weather.

How Does Rainy Weather Relate to Writing?

Ship Nineteen in the Carduan Chronicles arrives in the Ozark ravine in mid February. Over the next few months, spring arrives with its rainy weather.

Now, for people rain is not a big problem unless there is a flood. What is it like for something as small as a bird? What happens to an insect hit with a big drop of rain?

Occasionally there is mention of such things. Mosquitoes are shoved out of the way by the air wave surrounding the rain drop. Most insects hide under leaves or other coverings for protection.

rain makes finding writing time easier
Spring floods aren’t uncommon in the Ozarks. If you were only four inches tall, how scary would this sight be? And would you consider a creek to be a river?

And the Carduans?

My characters are four inches tall. A thunderstorm downpour could prove deadly to one of them. And, as their home planet is arid, they are not very familiar with rain.

That is part of the story. This group of nine must learn about and learn to survive in this Ozark ravine.

Writing the Story

One of the challenges of writing about these tiny characters is visualizing what the world would be like for them. There are so many times I find I must go back and rewrite a scene as I wrote it for someone my height, not theirs.

Another challenge is the timing of spring events. What types of weather happen during this time? It isn’t only rainy weather. Which plants are blooming? Are they edible?

What animals are moving around? Which will ignore the Carduans? Which will consider them snack food? How can these characters defend themselves? Which animals can they consider food? How do they catch these?

I am now half way through the rewrite for Ship Nineteen. The draft has long left the original behind leaving me to scan the old story and decide which parts to incorporate into the new story. And rainy weather certainly must play a part in the story.

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Long Lived Books

Some books are called classics, but really aren’t. Classics are long lived books that speak to readers many years, even centuries after they were written.

An author may dream of writing such a book, but it’s rare to achieve it. And the author will probably never know their book has become a classic.

What Makes a Classic Tale?

The simple answer is: I don’t really know. The things such books seem to have in common are: timeless themes; unforgettable characters; and intriguing plots.

Another thing classics seem to have in common is how well the theme, characters and plot can be molded into new tales. Romeo and Juliet comes to mind.

Shakespeare based his play on a tale he knew from his time. That tale is long forgotten. But his play lives on even though his lines are difficult for modern people to say and understand.

How many other stories, novels, plays and movies can you think of that are rewrites of Romeo and Juliet? West Side Story is an easy one for me.

Why Think About Long Lived Books?

I’ve just finished rereading “Gift From the Sea” by Anne Morrow Lindberg. My copy is a 1975 reissue printed 20 years after the 1955 original with a note by the author at the end.

whelk shell
Using shells such as this whelk, Anne Morrow Lindbergh in “Gift From the Sea” invites the reader to examine her life, to find the perfect shell that gets buried by life.

It’s a series of essays revolving around shells she picked up on a beach during a short vacation. Each shell is linked to a time in a woman’s life.

The idea behind the essays is a chance to re-evaluate your life. Her answer is to try to simplify, admittedly almost an impossibility for women with so many responsibilities. Yet, it sets a goal for a woman to find herself and hold on to what she is in spite of all the distractions and responsibilities. One aspect so many of us have lost is taking time for ourselves, for reflection, for thought, time without interruption by phones, texts, emails, children, friends, family. This may be only a short time each day, but it lets us define who we are for ourselves instead of letting others tell us who they think we are or should be.

Classic?

“Gift From the Sea” may not be a classic tale, but it is one of the long lived books. I would be thrilled to have one of my books be so valued by readers, still speak to readers, 20 years after I wrote it.

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Edwina’s Strange World

Edwina’s strange world began in a rather mundane way. I heard about a divorce and its aftermath from a friend.

Although I do base many of my novels on true tales or people I’ve known over the years, I don’t write about them. So this divorce tale was a base to build on and embellish.

Creating Aleta

The plot began revolving around Aleta. Her parents were divorcing. She, as an only child, is lost. Trite.

Then the father remarries. Now Aleta is even more lost as the new wife comes with children and raises foster children. Aleta needs a friend.

cover for "Edwina" by Karen GoatKeeper
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Enter Edwina

About that time we watched an old movie called “Harvey” starring Jimmy Stewart. The idea of this invisible being was intriguing. I did some research and Edwina’s strange world emerged.

Suddenly there were lots of possibilities. One was that Edwina could influence things around her without being seen. A second was that Aleta would be seen as strange talking to an invisible being.

Was Aleta reverting to being a child? Was she having mental problems?

Siblings and Bullying

Bullying at school is nothing new. Even with all the modern interventions and training for teachers, bullies still flourish. They just become more devious or, now, move online.

Now Edwina and Aleta had enemies to thwart. Of course, they did become a bit unrealistic. However, the premise is sound.

Sibling rivalry is nothing new. Aleta and Megan are set at odds as each was the first in their former lives. Both want to maintain that status.

Somehow these two girls must find a way to co-exist. If they succeed in dragging their parents into it, the new family may be doomed.

Fantasy Fun

Edwina’s strange world is fantasy. In my own world, big, black, red-eyed dogs invisible to all but one don’t exist. That world was fun to visit for a time.