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Sitting at my computer now I am being serenaded by gray tree frogs. In the distance are several different birds settling on their roosts. Later on the whip-poor-will will call. This will be the Carduan world.

A thunderstorm went through earlier this evening. Storms are common during an Ozark spring. Ice and snow fall in February, maybe March. Rain in March and April. Thunderstorms mark the change from spring to summer in late April and May. This will be the Carduan world.

Being Complacent

There are lots of interactions going on between the nine Carduans. It is easy to focus my writing on these and toss in a storm now and then. But that isn’t real. It’s being lazy, being complacent, not thinking about the natural world.

Putting the natural world into the Carduan world will take outlining the various weeks. They do have approximate dates assigned in the outline I already have. Now I need to do a second outline with the weather, plant blooming, animal appearances, sounds that might occur during each of those weeks.

One of the first edible plants easy to find in the spring is the dandelion. Although it is an import from Europe and occasional near creeks and pasture edges, it could be found by the Carduans. Both the flowers and leaves are edible. The root can be roasted and used for a coffee substitute.

How do I Know These?

That is the good thing about setting Cardua in an Ozark ravine. I’ve walked ravines, pastures, explored creeks, watched various storms and their aftermaths for thirty years.

No, I don’t know everything that happens. No one does. But I can add enough of these to make the Carduan world seem real. And that matters to me and, I hope, to readers of this massive work once it gets done.

When will “The Carduan Chronicles” be done?

I am impatient to see this story finally get written. It has been several years in the planning, drafting, rewriting and editing. I want to move on to other projects.

However, I want these books, and I find there will be four of them, to be right. That takes time. I’m hoping the first one about Ship Nineteen will be done and out this fall. The one on Ship Eighteen should be ready about the same time.

This depends on my writing time and getting the Carduan world right.

I’m reading a fun book now called “The Wild Robot” by Peter Brown in which a robot is marooned on an island. Being a robot, she doesn’t eat so Brown is saved the problem of menu planning.

On the other hand, my Carduans are alive and do eat. They need to explore their ravine and find foods they find palatable and obtainable.

Plant Menu Planning

Since the Carduans arrive in the ravine in mid February, their plant choices are very limited. Most plants are dormant until the weather warms up. The plantains, chickweed and dandelions I see in my garden are not often seen in the ravines as they are alien plants, although they emigrated here in colonial times.

As the weeks go by, the weather warms and lots of plants start to appear. The action takes place over fifteen six-day weeks, so there is a time frame.

My research covers when different plants appear, grow and bloom. Then the question is whether they are edible. Some like yellow rocket are edible, but bitter. Water cress is edible, but an acquired taste. Spicebush and redbud blooms are tasty, but hard to reach for the Carduans.

Although a squirrel would be a good meal for the Carduans, catching one is quite a different matter. Squirrels are bigger than they are and easily climb trees. They are also fierce fighters.

Meat Menu Planning

The Carduans are omnivores, eating both plants and animals. However, the Carduans are limited in what animals they can tackle.

People think of deer or wild turkey. These are far too big for the Carduans to tackle. Even rabbits are bigger than they are.

The most available creatures small enough for the Carduans to tackle are mice, voles, minnows and crawdads, possibly moles, chipmunks and squirrels. Since the permanent camp they establish is near what they call a river and we call a creek, minnows and crawdads are easily found. The others are harder to find.

One other source of food is one most people would avoid: insects. Many insects are edible, the right size and, during warm months, available.

Menu planning for such small characters is challenging. It forces me to think outside the box.